Hi Brent, Nice work on the pitch. You seemed to have it really well memorized, which was what I had trouble with most. One thing I would suggest is maybe going into a little more detail as to how you would go about offering this service: whether you'd act as almost a private inspector to check up on these facilities and check off whether they meet regulations, or whether you'd be petitioning the government to lower regulations.
Hello Brent, I think you did a really good job with your 90 second elevator pitch. I think, for a first draft, you showed great signs of confidence and I was really impressed that you had a big part of it memorized. I think you are on a path to success, keep it up!!
Hey Brent, Awesome job on your first elevator pitch. I thought you were able to successfully grab my attention when pitching me your idea and opportunity which is the key ingredient on any successful business pitch. I found your overall information was more than enough to hook and reel somebody as well as easily get the main points across. Again great work!
Hi Brent,
ReplyDeleteNice work on the pitch. You seemed to have it really well memorized, which was what I had trouble with most. One thing I would suggest is maybe going into a little more detail as to how you would go about offering this service: whether you'd act as almost a private inspector to check up on these facilities and check off whether they meet regulations, or whether you'd be petitioning the government to lower regulations.
Hello Brent, I think you did a really good job with your 90 second elevator pitch. I think, for a first draft, you showed great signs of confidence and I was really impressed that you had a big part of it memorized. I think you are on a path to success, keep it up!!
ReplyDeleteHey Brent,
ReplyDeleteAwesome job on your first elevator pitch. I thought you were able to successfully grab my attention when pitching me your idea and opportunity which is the key ingredient on any successful business pitch. I found your overall information was more than enough to hook and reel somebody as well as easily get the main points across. Again great work!